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March 14th, 2010

bindingthreads

10:39 pm - A Critique Request for Original Fiction This is an excerpt from a short story. I'm looking for constructive criticism, feedback about tone, coherency, clarity, and anything else you might think of while reading. Does it interest you, does it make any sense? Would you want to read on? Those kind of questions. :) Thank you for your time! ( The Lady of the Evening Light )

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May 11th, 2009

ms_danson

12:22 pm - Every time you swear... ( Cut for swearing, some violence, and an attempt at humour. )

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April 15th, 2009

foxfinial

03:31 pm - INTRODUCTIONS As I'd rather this comm doesn't become full of intro posts, please feel free to introduce yourself in the comments here. What kind of fantasy do you like to write? Do you write long or short things? What are you working on at the moment? etc Off-topic comments are totally fine. =) I'm your mod, foxfinial (aka Alex), a reader and writer of weird fantasy. My favourite authors are China Miéville, KJ Bishop, Catherynne M Valente, Milorad Pavic, Jeff VanderMeer, Steph Swainston, M John Harrison, Christopher Barzak and probably some others. I'm currently writing a novel about a war between humans and water-people in a secondary world heavily influenced by Thailand. It's being told in the form of a fake history book comprising various texts, such as translations (with footnotes, om nom), letters, chronicles, journal entries, messages on clothing. I've had some short fiction and poetry published, and am submitting a completed novel to agents. I hope you like this comm!

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foxfinial

01:29 pm - QUESTIONS If you've read the COMMUNITY RULES and you still have a question, please post it here. I'll draw up a FAQ if it becomes necessary.

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foxfinial

01:23 pm - COMMUNITY RULES ( Please read before posting. )